Talk:Floating field

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About "ideal hunting ground": My mistake, the original sentence had "Ideal hunting grounds" not "rich". ^^;

You said "...but instead to an unstable gravitational field." "an" in incorrect here because it refers to one-of-many, but there is only one gravitational field there. In fact, rewriting the sentence a little (to "One such instance is the cause of the Floating field, the name not referring to any grass, but instead to the unstable gravity there.") seems to work better than switching "an" and "the".

You said "Normally this would have resulted in a gravitational shock wave as the forces balanced, but in this case the rift, though not physically accessible, has never fully closed." While both of our versions are correct, my original version (I said "Normally this would result in a...") talks about that sort of event in general while yours (talking about it in the past) fits better with the overall context of the paragraph. --Oldman40k2003 06:55, 20 December 2007 (PST)


Ok I see ^_^